So try to make the message clearer, you have a objective collect ANONYMOUS data, so maybe a dialog with short text will no do any good
change the title dialog to Telemetry (not Privacy), put text along the lines:
The Fedora Project needs to collect ANONYMOUS (Not User identifiable) data as example (link to list) about how the community uses the OS and know the community as a whole(how big is, what are the main apps, remember is the community not one a individual, so the Fedora Project can allocate resources, develop or optimize OS features, will not collect any identifiable data as (link to example), and all raw data will be published at link(1). Please help us to make Fedora a better OS
Yes / No, no choice selected.
(1) If someone download the data and find a way to de anonymize it, The project will delete that data, and make sure the path to collect that data is deleted in a update.
The Project have to trust the users to help the developers (So collect only anonymous data and tell that) .
If the users known that the data collected is anonymous, and is to make the project better, or have real answers to questions, the users will help turning on the telemetry.
by example I’m using Fedora Workstation, and the telemetry will not make jump ship, maybe if I’m unable to know what data is collected, I only will turn it off, so before you collect the data tell us what type is. maybe one dialog will not sufficient, but one and two subdialogs will
In my case, the only thing that can make me choose another OS, is if all apps are only available as flatpaks, the rpms apps are working for years, and the rpms have the advantage, using the system libs. and the telemetry will answer the question, what really the users in Fedora prefer rpms / flatpaks?
or is virt-manager still used? I do in three computers
my only problem with gnome/Fedora is the open dialog defaulting to Documents and not to the last location, I have many folders so I have to make too many repeating clicks, to open documents.
and about the question where jump ship? at the moment I don’t have option, is about a learning curve and more shortcoming than flatpaks.
Gabrielo