Review of Outreachy wrap-up blog

Project Discussion
#1

Hello everyone,

This is my last wrap-up blog of Outreachy internship

https://communityblog.fedoraproject.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=10965&action=edit

Please give your reviews and share your feedback. Thankyou!

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#2

Hi Subhangi! I’ll take a look at this shortly.

#3

Looks great! I made a few small changes for readability, including:

  • Splitting sentences to make them shorter
  • Splitting paragraphs to make them shorter
  • Changing some sentences from passive to active voice
  • Various small wording and punctuation changes

I also removed the image and set a “featured image”. The post is scheduled to run at 0800 UTC on Thursday 5 May.

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#4

Hello Ben,
That sounds really great!. Thanks for your review and the corrections you made to my blog.