@siddharthvipul, I rewrote your first paragraph to make it less of a copy/paste from the GCI website. I also moved a paragraph that was further down to near the top so that it flows better and gives a better preview of what’s “above the fold” (e.g. above the Read More element). I made a few small grammatical changes as well.
I don’t know that the list of items broken down by each day adds much to the reader. Would you mind providing a small paragraph for each one that describes what you did/experienced?